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		<title>No, Lennie. I ain&#8217;t mad. I never been mad</title>
		<link>http://nstearns.edublogs.org/2009/12/04/no-lennie-i-aint-mad-i-never-been-mad/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Dec 2009 17:41:19 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>nstearns</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[10th Grade English]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Of Mice and Men]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[After 10 minutes of zen meditation, we take the test.
Then, I’d like to think about constructing a new cover for Of Mice and Men. See these examples and use the new Life Magazine Google archive (use the 1930s set and try different search terms such as ‘migrants’ or ‘ranch’) for help or just go old [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright" src="http://images.pearsoned-ema.com/jpeg/large/9780582506220.jpg" alt="" width="174" height="253" />After 10 minutes of zen meditation, we take the test.</p>
<p>Then, I’d like to think about constructing a new cover for<em> Of Mice and Men.</em> See <a href="http://www.librarything.com/work/3657/covers">these examples </a>and use the new <a href="http://images.google.com/hosted/life">Life Magazine Google archive</a> (use the 1930s set and try different search terms such as ‘migrants’ or ‘ranch’) for help or just go old school and break out the pens and paper. Online use Seashore or Keynote and make a screen capture (command-shift-4).</p>
<p>When you are finished,  email the result to <span style="text-decoration: underline;">micecover@drop.io</span>.  Title the work first initial+last name_micecover.jpg.  So, my file would be nstearns_micecover.jpg. Or go <a href="http://drop.io/micecover">here</a> and upload the file.</p>
<p><strong>HW: Have a great weekend.</strong></p>
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		<title>&#8220;An&#8217; I get to tend the rabbits!&#8221;</title>
		<link>http://nstearns.edublogs.org/2009/12/02/an-i-get-to-tend-the-rabbits/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Dec 2009 15:03:37 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>nstearns</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[10th Grade English]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Of Mice and Men]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[review]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[So, we&#8217;ll spend the day preparing for the Of Mice and Men test on Friday.  The idea is to help you get prepared with the knowledge and skills you need to be successful. Let&#8217;s go.
First, each small group will be assigned a chapter and will be asked to write 4 short answer questions of the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright" src="http://www.creationsbydawn.net/pi/tutorials/rabbit.jpg" alt="" width="289" height="260" />So, we&#8217;ll spend the day preparing for the <em>Of Mice and Men</em> test on Friday.  The idea is to help you get prepared with the knowledge and skills you need to be successful. Let&#8217;s go.</p>
<p>First, each small group will be assigned a chapter and will be asked to write 4 short answer questions of the type that could be seen on the test (not too easy, not too hard).  Also, write one more thoughtful question that asks students to think about the right and wrong of actions made by the characters.</p>
<p>Then, we&#8217;ll try a little OMM Jeopardy. May the best team win.</p>
<p>Next, we&#8217;ll work in small groups and answer these Literary term questions in <a href="http://www.quickieq.com/nstearns1">QuickieQ</a>.</p>
<p>Continuing on&#8230;I&#8217;ll give you the three essay questions I&#8217;ll be offering on the OMM final.  Take about 10-15 minutes to use the book or the <a href="http://www2.stjohnsprep.org/teachers/mm_english/steinbeck/of_mice_men/contents.html">online text</a> to take notes and prepare to write the essay in class. You can use these notes on Friday. <span style="text-decoration: underline;">Choose 1.</span></p>
<ol>
<li>What is John Steinbeck trying to say about <strong>dreams and plans</strong> in <em>Of Mice and Men</em>. Use at least 3 examples from the book to back up your ideas.</li>
<li>What is John Steinbeck trying to say about his <strong>vision of America </strong> in<em> Of Mice and Men</em>. Use at least 3 examples from the book to back up your ideas.</li>
<li>What is John Steinbeck trying to say about <strong>loneliness and friendship</strong> in <em>Of Mice and Men</em>. Use at least 3 examples from the book to back up your ideas.</li>
<li>What is John Steinbeck trying to say about <strong>Fate and Powerlessness</strong> in <em>Of Mice and Men.</em> Use at least 3 examples from the book to back up your ideas.</li>
</ol>
<p>Finally, if we have time, I&#8217;d like to think about constructing a new cover for &#8220;Of Mice and Men.&#8221; See <a href="http://www.librarything.com/work/3657/covers">these examples </a>and use the new <a href="http://images.google.com/hosted/life">Life Magazine Google archive</a> (use the 1930s set and try different search terms such as &#8216;migrants&#8217; or &#8216;ranch&#8217;) for help or just go old school and break out the pens and paper.</p>
<p><strong>HW: Prepare for the test.</strong></p>
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		<title>Stand and Deliver&#8230;</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Nov 2009 18:23:51 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>nstearns</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[10th Grade English]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[Today&#8217;s the day! I&#8217;ll give you 15-20 minutes to prepare and then we&#8217;ll take turns&#8211;one by one&#8211;and present out poems to the class.  Of course, I expect ridiculous levels of love and respect from everyone. Vote here.
Afterward, we&#8217;ll be talking a bit about Of Mice and Men.  We&#8217;ll look at these 4 selections from chapters [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Today&#8217;s the day! I&#8217;ll give you 15-20 minutes to prepare and then we&#8217;ll take turns&#8211;one by one&#8211;and present out poems to the class.  Of course, I expect ridiculous levels of love and respect from everyone. <a href="http://www.quickieq.com/nstearns1">Vote here</a>.</p>
<p>Afterward, we&#8217;ll be talking a bit about <em>Of Mice and Men</em>.  We&#8217;ll look at these 4 selections from chapters 4-5 and talk about what theme might be present in each, what Steinbeck might be saying through these stories.</p>
<ol>
<li>Crooks said, gently&#8230;to looking towards the window. (pgs 72-73)</li>
<li>Crooks interrupted brutally&#8230;He stopped, overwhelmed with his picture. (pgs. 75-76)</li>
<li>The girl flared up&#8230;&#8221;I know you guys.&#8221; (pgs. 78-79)</li>
<li>Curley&#8217;s wife laughed at him&#8230;I done another bad thing (90-91)</li>
</ol>
<p><strong>HW: Finish the book</strong></p>
<p><strong>Extra: See the whole text of the book online <a href="http://www2.stjohnsprep.org/teachers/mm_english/steinbeck/of_mice_men/contents.html">here</a>.</strong></p>
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		<title>I tell &#8216;ya I coulda went with shows!</title>
		<link>http://nstearns.edublogs.org/2009/11/18/i-tell-ya-i-coulda-went-with-shows/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Nov 2009 18:09:12 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>nstearns</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[10th Grade English]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Of Mice and Men]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[poetry]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[First, we&#8217;ll do a little writing based on your poem. On your blog, respond to the following prompt:
Take a look at the poem you&#8217;re presenting on Friday.  Try and give a more or less literal summary of the poem.  What are the parts that you don&#8217;t understand? What are the parts that you think are [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright" src="http://graphics8.nytimes.com/images/2008/10/19/nyregion/19theatctspan.jpg" alt="" width="336" height="202" />First, we&#8217;ll do a little writing based on your poem. On your blog, respond to the following prompt:</p>
<p>Take a look at the poem you&#8217;re presenting on Friday.  Try and give a more or less literal summary of the poem.  What are the parts that you don&#8217;t understand? What are the parts that you think are interesting uses of words or imagery?  What do you like best about your poem?  (200 words)</p>
<p>Then, we&#8217;ll spend a little time working on memorizing.  We&#8217;ll spend the time we need  to make our poems seem as natural as possible.</p>
<p>Next, we&#8217;ll see a short presentation on literary terms: <a href="http://nstearns.edublogs.org/files/2009/11/Lit-Term-2.pdf">irony, foreshadowing, and conflict</a>.</p>
<p>Finally, we&#8217;ll <a href="http://www.quickieq.com/nstearns1">answer questions about Chapter 4 in OMM</a> and hopefully get a headstart on Chapter 5 in class.</p>
<p><strong>HW: Read Chapter 5 and be ready to present your poem on Friday</strong></p>
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		<title>Not this Lenny</title>
		<link>http://nstearns.edublogs.org/2009/11/09/not-this-lenny/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Nov 2009 17:56:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>nstearns</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[10th Grade English]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[Let&#8217;s have a tiny reading time (30 minutes or so), just so we don&#8217;t forget.
Then, we&#8217;ll do some big time poetry memorizing. Our first step is to get our 14 lines in and then we&#8217;ll need to talk about

 pauses
volume
speed
eye contact with audience
emotion
hand gestures.

We might also try and get a look at the most recent [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright" src="http://cartoonwar.files.wordpress.com/2009/03/lenny.jpg" alt="" width="134" height="365" />Let&#8217;s have a tiny reading time (30 minutes or so), just so we don&#8217;t forget.</p>
<p>Then, we&#8217;ll do some big time poetry memorizing. Our first step is to get our 14 lines in and then we&#8217;ll need to talk about</p>
<ul>
<li> pauses</li>
<li>volume</li>
<li>speed</li>
<li>eye contact with audience</li>
<li>emotion</li>
<li>hand gestures.</li>
</ul>
<p>We might also try and get a look at the most recent winners. <a href="http://www.poetryoutloud.org/2009videos.html">Video here</a>.</p>
<p>Finally, we&#8217;ll get another look at <em>OMM</em>. We&#8217;ll <a href="http://www.quickieq.com/nstearns1">answer questions for chapters 1-2</a> and I&#8217;ll give a short presentation on literary terms.</p>
<p><strong>HW: Read chapter 3. Final poetry presentations will be next Wednesday.<br />
</strong></p>
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		<title>Guys like this&#8230;</title>
		<link>http://nstearns.edublogs.org/2009/11/06/guys-like-this/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 18:09:12 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>nstearns</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[10th Grade English]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[characterization]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Of Mice and Men]]></category>

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that work on ranches, are the loneliest guys in the world. They got no family. They don&#8217;t belong no place. . . . With us it ain&#8217;t like that. We got a future. We got somebody to talk to that gives a damn about us. We don&#8217;t have to sit in no bar room blowin&#8217; [...]]]></description>
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<p><em>that work on ranches, are the loneliest guys in the world. They got no family. They don&#8217;t belong no place. . . . With us it ain&#8217;t like that. We got a future. We got somebody to talk to that gives a damn about us. We don&#8217;t have to sit in no bar room blowin&#8217; in our jack jus&#8217; because we got no place else to go. If them other guys gets in jail they can rot for all anybody gives a damn. But not us.&#8221;</em></p>
<p>&#8211;Chp.1 <em>Of Mice and Men</em></p>
<p>First, I&#8217;ll do a little <a href="http://nstearns.edublogs.org/files/2009/11/CharacterizationTheme.pdf">presentation</a> on literary terms in <em>Of Mice and Men</em>. We&#8217;ll look at characterization and theme.</p>
<p>Then, groups will choose either George or Lenny and they&#8217;ll go through the methods of characterization and quote from chapter 1 a short sample that show that method and what it says about the character. <a href="http://nstearns.edublogs.org/files/2009/11/Below.doc">Handout</a></p>
<p>Next, we&#8217;ll read a bit from chapter 2 and talk a bit about the new characters. I&#8217;ll then ask you to respond in a short writing assignment to the following prompt:</p>
<blockquote><p><em>Take the discussion between George and the Boss.  What happens? What theme do you think Steinbeck is working with here and what is he saying?</em></p></blockquote>
<p>Put your answer <a href="http://quickieq.com/nstearns1">here</a>.</p>
<p>Finally, we&#8217;ll take some time to work in memorizing pairs and work together to get the poems memorized.</p>
<p><strong>HW: Read chapter 2 (pgs. 16-37).  Keep memorizing.  Remember, we see each other for a full A-day Monday.</strong></p>
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		<title>Don&#8217;t be a bunny!</title>
		<link>http://nstearns.edublogs.org/2009/11/04/dont-be-a-bunny/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Nov 2009 18:01:04 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>nstearns</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[10th Grade English]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Of Mice and Men]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[Let&#8217;s start with a scavenger hunt to introduce Of Mice and Men&#8211;our next book. Each group should record their answers here.

1) What was the price of a coat during the 1930s when the book was set and published (1937)?
2) The book takes places in Salinas, California.  What towns are near Salinas? What&#8217;s the nearest big [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Let&#8217;s start with a scavenger hunt to introduce <em>Of Mice and Men</em>&#8211;our next book. Each group should record their answers <a href="http://www.quickieq.com/nstearns1">here</a>.</p>
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<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">1) What was the price of a coat during the 1930s when the book was set and published (1937)?</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">2) The book takes places in Salinas, California.  What towns are near Salinas? What&#8217;s the nearest big city?</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">3) Explain what a <em>bindlestiff </em>is and what their lives were like  in the 20s and 30s.</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">4) John Steinbeck was a controversial writer. Explain why he was famous and why he was controvesial.</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">5) Where does the title <em>Of Mice and Men</em> come from and what does it mean?</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">6) Give me a few of the lyrics of a popular song written within a few years of 1937.</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">7) How were mentally disabled people treated during the 1930s? Give your source and be as specific as possible.</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">Eight) Find and name a famous painting (and the painter) that was painted in 1937.</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">9) Something happened to one of Steinbeck&#8217;s early drafts of <em>Of Mice and Men. </em>What happened?</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">10) How did people dress in 1937?  Find 2 pictures: 1 of well-off people and another of working class people.</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">Resources: <a style="padding-top: 1px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 1px; padding-left: 0px; color: #a90000; text-decoration: none; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-color: #bbbbbb; margin: 0px;" href="http://images.google.com/hosted/life">Life Magazine photo archive</a>, <a style="padding-top: 1px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 1px; padding-left: 0px; color: #a90000; text-decoration: none; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-color: #bbbbbb; margin: 0px;" href="http://memory.loc.gov/ammem/index.html">American Memory</a>, <a style="padding-top: 1px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 1px; padding-left: 0px; color: #a90000; text-decoration: none; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-color: #bbbbbb; margin: 0px;" href="http://www.steinbeck.org/MainFrame.html">National Steinbeck society</a>, <a style="padding-top: 1px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 1px; padding-left: 0px; color: #a90000; text-decoration: none; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-color: #bbbbbb; margin: 0px;" href="http://www.michigan.gov/hal/0,1607,7-160-15481_19268_20778-52530--,00.html">Prices: Then and Now</a>, <a style="padding-top: 1px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 1px; padding-left: 0px; color: #a90000; text-decoration: none; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-color: #bbbbbb; margin: 0px;" href="http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/amex/dustbowl/">Surviving the Dust Bowl</a>.</p>
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<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">After we do that and share our answers, we’ll start reading <em>Of Mice and Men&#8217;s</em> first chapter.</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;">Finally, I want to spend some time memorizing our poems.  We&#8217;ll get buddy&#8217;s to help each other and try to get up to 14 lines by the end of the day.</p>
<p style="margin-top: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 1.5385em; margin-left: 0px; padding: 0px;"><strong>HW:  Read chapter 1 (pgs. 1-16) and have 14 lines memorized.</strong></p>
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		<title>Sonata for Two Pianos</title>
		<link>http://nstearns.edublogs.org/2009/10/28/sonata-for-two-pianos/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Oct 2009 17:14:09 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>nstearns</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[10th Grade English]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[personal essay]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[poetry]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[To start, let&#8217;s look at the winner of the 2007-2008 Kaplan contest
1) Look at the 1st paragraph. How does the author try to hook us? What works and what doesn’t?
.2) Look at the 2nd paragraph. Quote 3 segments where the author uses sensory detail to explain what is happening. What works/doesn’t?
3) What does the Mozart [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="It's Magic!"><img class="alignright" src="http://www.paulhahn.com/images/pianos.jpg" alt="" width="353" height="214" /></a>To start, let&#8217;s look at the <a href="http://www.kaptest.com/oneoff/essay/2008-1st-place-essay.jhtml">winner of the 2007-2008 Kaplan contest</a></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">1) Look at the 1st paragraph. How does the author try to hook us? What works and what doesn’t?</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">.2) Look at the 2nd paragraph. Quote 3 segments where the author uses sensory detail to explain what is happening. What works/doesn’t?</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">3) What does the Mozart practice segment show us about the author? Why is it there?</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">4) Analyze the ending.  How does the writer bring it all together? What does she <em>tell</em> us here?</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">5) Why do you think this won 5k? Did it deserve it? Explain.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">
<p>Then, we&#8217;ll take some time to work on our own personal essays.</p>
<p>Finally, I want to take a look at <a href="http://poetryoutloud.org/poems/browsepoems.html">Poetry Out Loud </a>and choose our own poems.  Here&#8217;s the site and here are the qualifications. Choose a poem that is at least 14 lines long with extra credit for any choice over 25 lines. There is even a <a href="http://www.poetryoutloud.org/poems/search.html">keyword search</a>.  We&#8217;ll bust out the note cards in class to start the memorizing process.</p>
<p><strong>HW: Finish the Personal Essay. Print it!</strong></p>
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		<title>Poetry out really loud!</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Oct 2009 16:02:15 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>nstearns</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[We&#8217;ll start with a bit on Poetry Out Loud and see the DVD (or at least part of it).
Click here for the Personal Essay assignment.
Then, we&#8217;ll take our pre-writes and convert them into 1st drafts.  In class, we&#8217;ll talk a bit about hooks and good introductions.  When we&#8217;re done, please cut and paste your hook/intros [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright" src="http://www.soap-boxing.com/images/boxers_logo_thumb_black.jpg" alt="" width="219" height="211" />We&#8217;ll start with a bit on Poetry Out Loud and see the DVD (or at least part of it).</p>
<p>Click<a href="http://nstearns.edublogs.org/files/2009/10/The-Personal-Essay-Assignment-4.doc"> here for the Personal Essay assignment</a>.</p>
<p>Then, we&#8217;ll take our pre-writes and convert them into 1st drafts.  In class, we&#8217;ll talk a bit about hooks and good introductions.  When we&#8217;re done, please cut and paste your hook/intros <a href="http://www.quickieq.com/nstearns1">here</a>.</p>
<p>Finally, if we have time, I&#8217;d like to look at one more student entry in the My Turn essay contest and learn what we can learn.</p>
<p><strong>HW: Full first draft of Personal Essay due.</strong> (200-300 words)</p>
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		<title>Velcro Shoes</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Oct 2009 17:09:23 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>nstearns</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[We&#8217;ll start with buddy work. Read your 2 paragraphs out loud to a buddy and listen for specific sensory details (remember RENNS?). Work together to improve the paragraph and post the results here.
Then, we&#8217;ll look at the My Turn essay (Ashley) essay and note the places where she uses specific examples and for what reason.
1) [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class="wp-caption alignright" style="width: 317px"><img src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_Q1RsowlDemo/SH7nxR9m-cI/AAAAAAAAAI8/fbz5ai-2brk/s320/elderly-couple.jpg" alt="Trust no one!" width="307" height="225" /><p class="wp-caption-text">Trust no one!</p></div>
<p>We&#8217;ll start with buddy work. Read your 2 paragraphs out loud to a buddy and listen for specific sensory details (remember RENNS?). Work together to improve the paragraph and post the results <a href="http://www.quickieq.com/nstearns1">here</a>.</p>
<p>Then, we&#8217;ll look at the<a href="http://nstearns.edublogs.org/files/2009/02/my-turn_ashley.doc"> My Turn essay (Ashley)</a> essay and note the places where she uses specific examples and for what reason.</p>
<p>1)    How does the writer use the hook (“three blonde heads”) to grab the reader and set the tone for the essay?<br />
2)    Re-read and paraphrase the paragraph starting “The first time I actually became aware…”<br />
3)    Why does the writer use the example of the pencils?  What is she trying to show?<br />
4) How does the writer create a <em>turning point</em>? What anecdotes and information does she give to show that she has regained her pride for her name? How does she demonstrate her changed attitude?<br />
5)    What advice would you give the writer to make the essay even better?</p>
<p>Then, we’ll read “<a href="http://www.newsweek.com/id/54988/output/print">Defending our Skies Against the Elderly</a>” and answer these questions.</p>
<ol>
<li>Re-read the 2nd paragraph. What are the details about the shoes meant to show and demonstrate?</li>
<li>What does the 3rd paragraph show us about the character of her grandfather?</li>
<li>Now skip down to the paragraph beginning “The man who never broke a law…” What does this anecdote about how airport security?</li>
<li>Why does the author think what happened to her father was unfair and unwarranted?  How does she explain her feeling? Is there some telling here? Is that bad?</li>
<li>How does the writer conclude the essay?  How do the earlier details make it effective?</li>
</ol>
<p>Our next trick will i<a href="http://nstearns.edublogs.org/files/2009/09/Pre.write.personal.essay.doc">nvolve a pre-writing activity</a> for our next writing assignment.</p>
<p>If we have time, I hope to have us see a bit of the DVD of Poetry Out Loud.</p>
<p><strong>HW: Pre-write for My Turn essay assignment</strong></p>
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