“Jumping up and down to Barney”

After reminding ourselves of the wonders of “Show, don’t (just) Tell,” we’re taking a look at your 1-10 paragraphs. In pairs read them, and point out particularly good examples of showing and places where there might be too much telling. Post at least one good example here. Use the Add Notes function.

Then, we’ll look at the 2nd place winner of the MyTurn College essay contest. We’ll read it out loud and comment directly on the writer’s use of specific examples.

Finally, it’s time for you to start thinking of your essay. Your first essay is the personal essay. In it:

“My Turn” Essay Contest judges look for direct personal experience and observation with a fresh, original point of view. They want engaging, moving, or thought-provoking essays that appeal to a national readership.

When writing your essay, you should follow a three-part format: the introduction, which includes an engaging lead; the body, which contains the central idea; and a conclusion, which sums up and expands on the main or central idea of the essay.

Use this form to start developing ideas for your first essay.

HW: Full pre-write for next Wednesday.  Monday reading book in class.